Tuesday, September 7, 2010
PLN4
In the article At least 63 structures burned in fire near Boulder by Joey Bunch, Bruce Finley and Kevin Vaughan. It matters because forest fires can damge a lot of difrent things. It says that at least 63 structures have been burned in the Boulder area because of a fire that has been burning many areas and has burned 35,000 acres. Nobody knows the cause of the fire yet but they will investigate once they stop the fire. It matters to me because if the fire keeps on burning it could cause a lot of damage and pollute more of the air to cause more global warming so my future will be worse. This matters to education because schools might have been burnt down and the kids have to leave the area and miss shcool so they wont be able to learn.This matters to the world because it is causing globel warming and also killing a lot of trees making it so we have less oxygen. To conclude this fire is causing a lot of damge to the area and the world and it needs to stop.
Eric-
ReplyDeleteRemember to talk about what matters and why in your topic sentence. The topic sentence should also contain the author. Also, the paragraph should be a summary of what matters, how it connects to you, to education, and to the world. Then, finish with a clear concluding sentence. Please redo. Good work hyperlinking your article, and including the title.