Sunday, October 3, 2010
PLN9
In the article "Rigor Redefined" by Tony Wagner it made me think am I learning enough in school for my future? What matters is that people won't have essential skills to live because the education right now isn't teaching us things that people want at their companies. I learned from the article that there are 7 skills that kids aren't learning but they need these skills for thier futures. This matters to me because I might not be learning enough to do well in my future. This matters to education because kids might not know enough to succeed in life. This matters to the world because kids aren't learning essential skills that they need as much anymore. To conclude kids need more philanthropist to help them learn essential skills.
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Eric-
ReplyDeleteyour topic sentence is more of a question, not a statement. Punctuate it as a question if that is what you are asking. Also, you need more of a summary of what Wagner is advocating. You don't explain what the article is about. You have nice connections, but work on expanding those thoughts. Push yourself to connect more deeply and with examples to support. Finally, proofread your response.
slow down. you needed an attention getter. i could not understand you. look up more
ReplyDeletegood connections but you looked really nervous and looked down alot but just practice and you will be good
ReplyDeletetry to look up more but good voice and good points overall good job
ReplyDeleteGREAT JOB..BEST ONE I HAVE SEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEN
ReplyDeleteWEW! YES! GO ERIC!! YEAA!
ineresting attention getter, good points, and good examples.Good question.
ReplyDeletekeep eye contact with audience. Good question
ReplyDeleteYou looked nervous but you had a good questin in school.
ReplyDeleteGood question but you should try harder to look at the audience when you present.
ReplyDeleteyou say "like" a lot but good qustion
ReplyDeleteGood question, good connections.
ReplyDeleteyou didnt make eye contact and you mumbled.
ReplyDeleteno. i dont like school! but good presentation!
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ReplyDeletegood presentation. you had good posture and it flowed very well. good job.
ReplyDeleteNice presentations, looked like you practiced it well.
ReplyDeletelook up more and don't mumble
ReplyDeleteYou had a great speech but oyu kept glanceing
ReplyDeleteGoob Job
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