Tuesday, September 28, 2010

PLN8

I read the article "Man killed outside Springs Walmart identified" by Kieran Nicholson when a man gets killed outside of walmart what matters from this is innocent people are being shot for no reason because some people are crazy. In this article it expalins a guy was walking outside of Walmart and he got shot for no reason. This matters to me because I go to Walmart and other places where I could be shot for no reason. This matters to education because if this happens at a school kids will miss school days. This matters to the world because there are millions of Walmarts and places like it where Innocent people could be killed. To conclude Innocent people are being killed by crazy people for no reason.
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  1. annesSeptember 30, 2010 at 7:14 AM

    Eric- your topic sentence needs to identify the what matters and why it matters. You then need to follow the topic sentence with a summary of what you read. Please redo.

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